Other say that students who show improvements be rewarded? It is indisputable that rewards and incentives motivate individuals to keep working for better results and improvement.
Students, particularly need this motivation to concentrate and keep focused in their studies.
However, many of them after completion of their secondary school, they opt for courses depending upon their fee paying capacity and not their caliber.
This situation have made thousands of students bury their dreams.
Educated people make an educated nation, as well as education allow us to open our minds to improve ourselves, our environment, our world, and to make educated choices about our future.
Through of education, the students have more opportunities to improve their skills, and also gain more knowledge in their professional field.
I believe if you review some of the preparatory lessons here, it will help you a lot to develop correctly your answer.
Secondly, I think you use too many commas where it is not needed or where it is not correct grammatically.
And, in respect of country obtain a good development social, and economical, a good education system is needed.
Have a good education system, the schools, institutes, and universities need obtain a good structure of learning, and teaching for children, and students.