It’s important to take advantage of any peer review you receive on your essay.
Even if you don’t take all of the advice you receive in a peer review, having advice to consider is going to help you as a writer.
Another proven strategy for revising an essay is to read the entire paper out loud to yourself.
Work slowly, reading the paper sentence by sentence.
As a result, peer critiques foster good work habits. Often, students confuse revising with proofreading. Although looking for errors is part of the revision process, revising also involves checking the paper for organization, revising the writing style for clarity, and making sure that the essay is appropriate for the audience.
Another strategy for revising is to move from general, or large-scale issues, to smaller issues.Finally, in addition to the outside feedback, there are some revision strategies that you can engage in on your own.Read your essay carefully and think about the lessons you have learned about logic, fallacies, and audience.This method of revision goes over the essay in several passes.First, for example, you might read the paper to critique your strategy toward the audience. Finally, read the paper carefully to look for errors in grammar and syntax.For an example of the revision process, check out this first video on revising from the Research area of the Excelsior OWL.A post draft outline can also help you during the revision process.This strategy often helps writers who have problems with grammatical errors and awkward phrasing because the ear can sometimes catch these errors more quickly than the eye.In addition, reading out loud forces you to slow down and consider each sentence.Some writers prefer to read each sentence starting at the end of the essay and work toward the beginning.Taking the sentences out of context in this manner helps some writers focus on each sentence.