We are very pleased to accept you into ABC University and hope that you find it a fulfilling and helpful experience that gets you on the road to achieving your dreams.
We wish you all the best and thank you for choosing ABC University.
Below are examples of the types of words and phrases commonly used in the first paragraph of an admittance letter: Naturally, there’s a lot of variation with the phrases here, but the examples above are fairly representative of what you’ll see in the opening of a college acceptance letter.
After the paragraph containing the offer of admission, you'll typically get a couple of sentences (which are really just compliments) about how your application stood out, how competitive the applicant pool was this year, and/or how you should be proud of yourself for getting in.
This is just the gist of what you can expect a college acceptance letter to say.
But what exactly does an admittance letter look like?
Here is a quick, helpful guide to writing the letter in as businesslike yet cordial a manner as possible.
Format and Content Since this is a very formal letter on behalf of your prestigious university, you will of course want to write on an official letterhead with proper spelling and grammar.
Please find all the necessary enrollment forms enclosed with this letter.
We appreciate your filling them out and returning them to us by August 15, 2014, in order to ensure your enrollment at ABC University and facilitate the acceptance process for our fall program.